BURAAQ · CHAPTER ONE

The Bridge

Chapter One — The Warning

A family on their way to dinner.
A bridge in the path of a storm.

Story by Adil and Kamil
Illustrations: AI-assisted

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Meet the cast

Omar

Hana’s dad. Behind the wheel.

Sara

Hana’s mum. Riding up front.

Hana

Their daughter. Ready for dinner.

Bilal

Bridge worker. Guiding traffic.

The storm grows heavier by the minute. Below the bridge, a cargo ship pushes through the black water.

The cargo ship approaches beneath the storm-lit bridge.HOOOOONK!
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Sara and Omar talk while Hana listens from the back seat.
Sara

Aunty called. I told her we’re on our way.

Omar

Did she save us some biryani?

Sara

You could ask how she’s doing first.

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Hana in her charcoal rear seat, smiling toward her parents with her game in her lap; her parents reply off-panel.
Hana

Baba, are we going to be late? I’m hungry.

Omar · off-panel

We’ll get there on time, in sha Allah.

Sara · off-panel

You two. All you think about is dinner.

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Bilal directs traffic around the closed lane.
Bilal

Keep moving left, please. Nice and slow.

Hana pats her fastened seatbelt.CLICK!
Sara

Belt still on?

Hana

Yep, Mama.

Cars begin moving with small gaps.
Omar

There we go. It’s clearing up.

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Then the sky splits open. Lightning strikes the top of the tower.

Lightning directly strikes the tower peak, spraying sparks as blue electrical arcs run down its upper edge; the ship approaches below.KRA-KOOM!
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Hana looks up, frightened by the metallic noise.GONNNG
Hana

What was that?

Sara

Did you hear that, Omar?

Omar

Probably just the wind. Don’t worry.

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High above the traffic, the steel begins to give way.

Heavy clevis and cross-pin on a thick bolted anchor plate; a crack develops in the supporting bridge girder.PING…
PING…
The mounting steel tears out beneath the substantial bolted connection; the cable stays attached above.KRRACK!
Omar

Oh my God.

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The loose cable swings down across the lanes, straight into their windshield.

Cracks spread across the windshield where the fitting strikes outside.KRAASH!
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The burgundy car skids across the wet roadway, windshield fractured.SKRRRR
Omar

I can’t see!

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Sara

Omar!

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Overhead view: curved skid tracks show the car spinning toward the outer barrier; traffic brakes behind.SKRREEEE!
Omar

Hold on!

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Only the barrier stands between the car and the drop.

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END OF CHAPTER ONE